Angel of Death

Hey Ash, I really like how this is turning out. Its leaning more away from the usual vampire stories which is good. I like how Sophia is not inhumanly beautiful ...

Hey Icaruss!! This was interesting. I liked the way that this was written and the topic was very touching but yet truthful. The only problem that I had was that, ...

OMG!!! Hey KJ!! Again you write a story that always has me thirsting for me. Gosh, I wish I could switch places with Rebecca. Journalism is a great class, and ...

Hey Tony!! This is beautiful and I can't believe no one commented on this. The only thing that I saw wrong was the title. It should be Inspiration, love. Well ...

I read this book! Oh and your avatar is amazing. I just love Owen. Yeah as a devoted Sarah Dessen fan I'd really recommend anything by her to anyone. She ...

Hey Ash! Well I did like this and it would be great to see more. You transitioned the emotions perfectly and the way you described what was going on made ...

Yay another good chapter! Really there is like nothing for me to critique. I liked this chapter too and Genny's voice is very clear and understanding seeing as though she ...

Hello! Wow this was beautiful. There were a couple of mistakes here and there but the overall story was written well. But I just have one question. What is your ...

Ah I hate cliffhangers! Oh hey, KJ!!! This was another great chapter! I have nothing bad to say because this was flawless. There was passion, suspense, and a little bit ...

Hey there! Well I just happened to be looking at your portfolio, just to find something to read and I picked this! The title is what really caught my eye. ...

Hello again, KJ!!! Yay! I'm finally getting to this. It took me a while but here I am. I love this chapter like every other one. It had lovely descriptions ...

Hey KJ!!! Gosh you're like a freakin' time-bomb. Never know when you're going to write a new story. I loved this! It was refreshing because after all this time sticking ...

Hey Jared!!! Thanks for telling me you posted this. I must confess, I didn't like this as much as the other parts. Although it had all of the suspense and ...

Hello there! This was a beautiful sonnet. It was very vivid and pretty. Yeah I don't know much about Sonnet's but I do like Shakeaspeare and this is almost like ...

Hey Kylan! Thanks for PMing me. Well this was very short but really really good, as always. Your sentences are flowing better and they're not being eaten up by the ...